第一部分 語言描寫

一、正確使用標點符號

(1)說話人+說話內(nèi)容

“說”后用逗號， 引號內(nèi)第一個字母大寫，句尾標點符號放在引號內(nèi)。

He said,“You are my best friend!”

(2) 說話內(nèi)容+說話人

陳述句引號內(nèi)用逗號， 引號外第一個字母小寫：疑問句或感嘆句引號內(nèi)用問號或感嘆號， 引號外第一個字母小寫。且“某人說”可以寫作“sb.said”也可以寫作“said sb.”。

① "Yes," he said.

②"You may both go," said Andy.

③"Don't move," she said to Mike in a soft voice.

(3)說話內(nèi)容+說話人+說話內(nèi)容

“某人說”可以寫作“sb.said”也可以寫作“said sb.”:

“某人說”前面引號內(nèi)用逗號，引號外第一個字母小寫。

“某人說”后面如果用句號，則后面引號內(nèi)第一個字母大寫；

“某人說”后面如果用逗號，則后面引號內(nèi)第一個字母小寫。

①“That's cool,”he said.“Can I have a try?”

②“You'd better let me go,”teased her twin brother, William.“There are dangers all over this place.”

③“You can go any place you want,”Amy said,“but I think you'll find what you need.”

二、避免重復使用 say

在進行語言描寫時很多同學全部都只用“said”這一個單詞，這樣使得句子重復呆板，因此要學會靈活多變的各種“說”。

explain 解釋

state 陳述

protest 抗議

sob哭訴

insist 堅持

comfort安慰

repeat 重復

agree同意

order命令

scream 尖叫

promise承諾

whisper 耳語

yell/shout 大叫

declare 聲稱

add 補充

assure 保證

complain 抱怨

apologise 道歉

announce 宣告

argue 爭論

interrupt 打斷

beg 請求

demand 要求

mock 嘲諷

claim 聲稱

cry/exclaim 喊叫

suggest/advise 建議

stammer/stutter/stumble 結(jié)巴

ask /inquire 詢問

reply/answer/respond回答

1.“Christine !照顧好你弟弟!”母親高聲喊道。

“Christine! Take care of your young brother!”Mother shouted at the top of her voice.

2.“Hannah，你知道她在哪兒嗎?她怎么樣?請告訴我。”他懇求道。

"Hannah, do you know where she is? How is she? Please tell me."He begged.

3.“報紙上有一個圣誕愿望競賽。”Amy的媽媽宣布，“給圣誕老人寫封信可能會得獎。”

“There's a Christmas wish con test on the newspaper,”Amy's mom announced.“Write a letter to Santa, and you might win a prize.”

三、如何讓對話更生動

第一類

“……,”sb said in a …voice/tone.某人以…的聲音、 語氣說到

in a pleasant tone/voice 以一種愉悅的聲音/語氣

in a firm tone/voice以一種堅定的聲音/語氣

in a rude tone/voice以一種粗魯?shù)穆曇?語氣

in a sad tone/voice 以一種悲傷的聲音/語氣

也可以用 in a voice/tone of+名詞的搭配

in a tone/voice of surprise 用一種驚訝的語氣

in a tone/voice of curiosity 用一種好奇的語氣

in a tone/voice of impatience 用一種不耐煩的語氣

in a tone/voice of command用一種命令的語氣

1.“你一定是安妮吧?”他用友好的語氣說。

“You must be Annie,”he said in a friendly tone.

2.“我很樂意。”艾米莉用愉快的語氣說。

“I would love to.”said Emily in a pleasant tone.

3.“我不想和你一起去。”艾米麗用不耐煩的語氣說。

“I don't want to go with you.”said Emily in a tone of impatience.

4.“不，我沒有告訴他這個秘密。”他用低沉的語調(diào)說.

“No, I didn’t tell him the secret.”he said in a low tone.

第二類

“xxx,”sb said in/with+心情類名詞.某人以…的心情說道……

1.“You are safe,”Tom cried with excitement.

“你安全啦！”Tom 激動地說道。

2.“I hate you!”she screamed in anger.

“我討厭你！”她生氣地大喊道。

3.“What a lovely rabbit,”I said in astonishment.

“好可愛的兔子??！”我詫異地說到。

4.“Nice to meet you,”he said with enthusiasm.

“很高興認識你。”他熱情地說。

第三類

“xxx,”sb said +adv..+doing.(添加非謂語動詞表達后續(xù)動作)

1.“我去給我們拿點咖啡。”她溫柔地說道，朝廚房走去。

“I'll get us some coffee,” she said gently, heading for the kitchen.

2.“我再也不相信你了。”他生氣地大喊道，砰的一聲關(guān)上門。

“I don't believe you anymore.”He yelled angrily, slamming the door.

3.“我被狼襲擊了，我以為再也見不到你了。”麥克激動地說，緊緊抱住他們。

“I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.”Mike said excitedly.hugging them tightly.

第四類

sb did sth.did sth and said“xxx.” (添加動作鏈)

1.他攔下出租車， 提著行李箱跳上車， 對司機說："請去警察局。"

He stopped the taxi, jumped in with the suitcase and told the driver.“Go to the police station,please.”

2.她沖上前去，跪在地上，喃喃地說：“對不起，我的寶貝。”

She dashed forward.knelt down and murmured," I'm sorry, my baby.”

3.我匆忙穿上衣服，拿起包說：“請等一下我！”

I put on my clothes hurriedly, grabbed my bag and said."Please wait for me!"

Translation

1.“沒人能理解我！”安迪哽咽著， 雙手掩面。

“Nobody could understand me!”Andy sobbed, burying his face in his hands.

2.農(nóng)夫抱起狗，跪下來，輕聲說：“現(xiàn)在是你的了。”

The farmer picked up the dog, knelt down and said in a soft voice,“It's yours now.”

3.她眼里噙著淚水說：“對不起。”

With tears in her eves, she said,“Sorry.”

4.“嗨， 蘭迪。我對意大利面條的事感到抱歉。”凱瑟琳低聲道歉， 臉漲紅了。

“Hi, Landy.I'm sorry about the spaghetti thing.”Catherine murmured an apology, her face reddening.

5.“看！”羅斯指著窗戶，激動地喊道。

“Look!”Rose pointed out the window and cried in great excitement.

6.“想試一下嗎?”我撫摸著瑪麗娜的手說。

“Want to try one on?”I said, touching Marina's hand.

7.我打開窗戶對著對面喊道。“我知道我們以前見過面， 但我不記得在哪里了。”。

I opened my window and shouted across,“I know we've met before, but I can't remember where.”

8.“想試一下嗎?”我撫摸著瑪麗娜的手說。

“Want to try one on?”I said, touching Marina's hand.

第二部分 結(jié)尾升華

一、分類

1、氛圍結(jié)尾:

floated in the air/filled +地點/…was bathed in“飄在空中/充滿/沉浸在”

(1) The golden sun light streaming in, laughter lingered around the yard and happiness floated in the air.

(2) With the cool breeze, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.

2、擁抱哭泣對話法

A hugged B tightly with tears flowing down one's cheeks, whispering...

母親給了我們每個人一個大大的擁抱，眼淚順著臉頰流下來，在我們耳邊低語：“謝謝你們的好意。是你的愛溫暖了我們。

The mother hugged us tightly with tears flowing down her cheeks, whispering in our ears,“Thank you for your kindness.It's your love that has warmed us up.”

3.強調(diào)句:

It is+名詞+that+謂語(count/matter/bring...)“正是…”

正是愛和關(guān)懷使世界運轉(zhuǎn)。

It is love and care that make the world go around.

4.From then on, “從那時起, ……”

從那時起，我總是盡可能地幫助別人。

From then on, I always give others a helping hand if possible.

從那時起，友誼在我們兩人的心中綻放。

From then on friendship bloomed in both of our hearts.

5.Only then did sb.realize that…“直到那時某人才意識到…”

直到那時我才意識到，我們不應(yīng)該把愛視為理所當然。

Only then did I realized that we should never take love for granted.

6.It occurred to sb.that…“某人突然想到…”

他突然想到，有了家人的愛，過生日就不再是煩惱了。

It occurred to him that with family's love, it was no longer disturbing to have birthday.

7.Many years have passed, but I will never forget ...“許多年過去了，但我永遠不會忘記…”

許多年過去了，但我永遠不會忘記那份特別的禮物。

Many years have passed, but I will never forget the special gift.

8.Many years have passed, but the experience is still deeply engraved in one's mind.

許多年過去了，但這段經(jīng)歷仍深深地銘刻在一個人的腦海里。

9.Never had sb.done sth.“某人從來沒有…”

她從來沒有這么驕傲過！

Never had she been so proud!

二、精彩結(jié)尾賞析

親情類

1.The Mother hugged the twins tightly, whispering,“This is the best surprise in the world!”

2.Only then did I realized that how much my mom loved me.

3.It occurred to me that family love is the greatest gift in life.

4.It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.

5.It was at this very moment that the frozen ice between two generations ——melted down into a warm stream flowing into their hearts.

6.The early sunlight streaming in, laughter lingered around the room and happiness floated in the air/the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.

7.After so many years, the taste of the cake, the laughter of friends and the embrace of my parents still lingered in my mind.

= the taste of the cake, the laughter of friends and the embrace of my parents were still deeply engraved in my mind.

8.This birthday is bound to be kept in my memory forever,lightening my future path.

助人類

1.有時候，我們小小的行動可以給別人帶來很大的不同。

Sometimes our small action can make a great difference to others.

2.許多年過去了，但我永遠不會忘記瑪格麗特的圣誕禮物和她的善舉。

Many years have passed, but I will never forget Margret's Christmas gifts and her act of kindness.

2.母親給了我們每個人一個大大的擁抱，在我們的眼中低語：“謝謝你們的好意。是你的愛溫暖了我們。”

The mother gave each of us a big hug, whispering in our eyes,“Thank you for your kindness.It's your love that has warmed us up.”

3.我突然想到，一個簡單的舉動可以讓世界變得更美好。

It occurred to me that a simple act could make the world so much better.

5.雖然外面的風還在呼嘯，但一股暖流涌上心頭。

Although the wind still screamed outside, a warm current rose in my heart.

個人成長類(逆境、積極向上)

1.在你身上發(fā)生了什么并不重要，重要的是你如何應(yīng)對。

It's not what happens to you, but how you react to it that matters.

2.直面困難，努力。你終將制造奇跡。

Be brave, rise to setbacks, and make efforts.You will end up creating miracles.

3.恐懼締造不了未來，但希望可以。

Fear never builds the future, but hope does.

4.每個人都像一朵花，有的有香味，有的沒有。只要你開花，就會有蜜蜂和蝴蝶。

Everyone is like a flower, some having fragrance, but some not.As long as you bloom, there will be bees and butterflies.

5.要把最壞的情況變成最好的情況，一個人應(yīng)該采取行動。

To change the worst situation into best, one should take actions.

6.正如諺語所說，永遠不會失敗。我要么贏，要么學習。

Just as a saying goes,“Never lose.I either win or learn.”

7.成功之路并不平坦。它充滿了挑戰(zhàn)和困難。

The journey to success is not smooth.It is full of challenges and difficulties.

個人成長類(夢想)

1.這是真的：如果夢想足夠大， 事實并不重要。

It's true: If the dream is big enough, the facts don't count.

2.任何一個有夢想，有勇氣和毅力的人都會成功。

Anyone with a dream, courage and persistence will be successful.

3.成為你可能成為的人永遠都不晚。

Only then did I realized that it's never too late to be all you can possibly be.

4.人類歷史上最偉大的發(fā)現(xiàn)是一個人可以通過改變他的態(tài)度來改變他的未來。

The greatest discovery of all time is that a person can change his future by merely changing his attitude.

5.你無法控制他人的行為，但你可以選擇如何應(yīng)對。

You cannot control the behavior of others, but you can always choose how you respond to it.

脫險類

1.多么死里逃生?。?/span>

What a narrow escape!

2.每當我回想起那次驚心動魄的經(jīng)歷，我仍然會感到一種強烈的恐懼感。

I would still feel a strong sense of fear whenever I looked back on the thrilling experience.

3.事實證明，只要我們保持冷靜，任何困境都是有出路的。

It turned out that there is always a way out of any difficult situations as long as we stay calm.

4.我從來沒有陷入過這樣危險的境地。這段經(jīng)歷深深地刻在了我的腦海里，提醒我要尊重自然。

Never had I fallen into such a dangerous situation.The experience was deeply engraved in my mind and reminded me to respect the nature.