2024高考英語(yǔ)作文真題及優(yōu)秀范文（全國(guó)甲卷）

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2024全國(guó)甲卷高考英語(yǔ)作文真題及優(yōu)秀范文

【作文真題】

英語(yǔ)課要求做課堂展示, 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給圖片，以Development of Transport in China為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

注意:

1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右;

2. 題目和首句已為你寫好。

Development of Transport in China

From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.

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【優(yōu)秀范文】

Development of Transport in China

From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.

Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.

In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.

【作文解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生根據(jù)所給圖片，以Development of Transport in China為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

【詞匯積累】

提供：offer→provide

極大地：dramatically→tremendously

減少：reduce→decrease

總之：in short→in a nutshell

【句式拓展】

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.

拓展句：Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility.

【高分句型1】

Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ))

【高分句型2】

These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)